Next week (3/2 and 3/4), we’ll be doing a mini-unit on grammar and academic writing–overview for that week will be posted in the next couple days. Then, we’ll begin Unit 2. This unit will take us all the way through spring break. It’s designed to be finish-able before spring break, so you can have a proper rest, but you’re also welcome to take the extra week to work on your final project for the unit.

Scheduling Notes: There is one day during this unit (Tuesday, 3/23) when we would normally have synchronous class, since it is a Tuesday, but instead we will be asynchronous. (I’ll be taking my PhD qualifying exams that week, and you’ll be working on your drafts.) Please feel free to schedule an appointment with me if you’d like to talk about your writing, though!

Then, we have spring break March 27 – April 4.

What is “Natural Science Writing”?

Well, there’s lots of genres of natural science writing, and we’ll be looking at several (science podcasts, science journalism, and academic articles). Broadly speaking, the natural sciences are sciences that look at the physical world: biology, chemistry, physics, neurology, zoology, and medicine, to name a few. Some kinds of psychology research might be considered natural science (how do the biological functions of our brain affect our thoughts and moods?) but some might not be.

Writing For This Unit

Your final project for this unit will be to write an imaginary scientific article in an academic style. So, you will not be doing experiments or (necessarily) doing online research (although you can if you want to). Instead, you will closely study the genre of the scientific article and make up content that matches the genre features. Don’t worry– we’ll look at some examples of both real articles and imaginary ones.

Grading/Checklist for This Unit

The Natural Science Unit as a whole will be worth 20% of your final grade, regardless of which grading plan you choose.

Maximum Flexibility Option Required Assignments/Grading:

1. Midterm Reflection (due 3/25)– 5 points, completion and thoroughness
2. Revised/Final Article Draft (due 4/6)- 15 points, see rubric

Because there are only two required assignments for you, I STRONGLY ENCOURAGE you to remain engaged in class/do as many of the readings and non-graded activities as you can. The flexibility grading option is designed to do just that — give you flexibility — but the non-graded elements are designed to facilitate the learning and writing process.

You are also MORE THAN WELCOME to turn in early drafts and participate in peer review– you just won’t be graded on it.

Total: 20 points. Each point is worth 1% of your final grade.

Structure and Accountability Option Required Assignments/Grading:

1. Observations/Annotations (due 3/11) – 2pts, completion
2. Brainstorming Activity (will do in class 3/11)– 2pts, completion
3. First Draft of Science Article (due 3/16)– 2 pts, completion, on time
4. Peer Review (due 3/23)– 4pts, completion, thoroughness, on time
5. Midterm Reflection (due 3/25)– 5 points, completion and thoroughness
6. Revised/Final Article Draft (due 4/6)- 15 points, see rubric

Total: 30 points. Each point is worth 0.67% of your final grade.
**I will input all the math into Blackboard so you don’t have to worry about calculating what this means for you**

At the end of each unit, I will ask you to submit a reflection on your/our work for that unit. The instructions/rubric for each one will be very similar.

The Due Date for Unit 1 Reflections is March 2 (Tuesday) before the start of class. You are welcome to submit them on Blackboard OR post them on the course site, if you would like to share your reflections with the class. There will be no penalty for turning this in late.

In your reflection, please answer the following questions:

1. What do you feel like you learned this unit that you didn’t know before?
2. What did you already know , but now understand better or learned more about?
3. What (if anything) do you feel like I wanted you to learn, but you still aren’t sure about?
4. What are the strengths of the writing you did for this unit? What are you most proud of?
5. If you were to revise the writing you did for this unit, what would you want to do differently?
6. How would you describe or rate your participation/engagement in this unit?
7. What did you do this unit that helped make you successful?
8. What (if anything) do you want to do differently in the next unit?
9. What additional things (resources, support, information, etc.) do you wish you had had for this unit?
10. Is there anything you would like me to change (in the structure of our course, in how I’m presenting information, etc.) going forward?
11. What (if anything) from this unit would you like to discuss/think about/explore further? (either this semester or just in your life)

You can write this as an essay, or you can copy/paste the questions and answer each one individually. You can be as formal or as informal as you want.

Length Requirement: There is no set length (in pages or word count) for this reflection. Your reflection should be as long as it needs to be for you to feel like you have answered all of the questions.

Grading:

The unit reflection will be graded out of 5 points.

0 points: You didn’t turn in a reflection.
1 point: You turn in something that does reflect on the unit at least a little
2 points: You address at least half of the questions in your reflection
3 points: You address most of the questions in your reflection
4 points: You answer all of the questions in your reflection
5 points: You answer all of the questions using specific examples

This week, we’ll be talking about how humanities criticism changes when it’s written in an academic style (for an essay for class, or a scholar’s article for an academic journal). This kind of writing is probably the most similar to essays you’ve done for literature classes in the past. Click here for an overview of the entire unit. 

Things We Did Last Week

• Looked at examples of humanities criticism in non-traditional/new media
• Theorized about the characteristics of reviews and criticism
• Created your own pieces of criticism in a non-traditional genre

Preparing For Next Class (Tuesday 2/23)

Assignments Due: None

Readings: 

Since early 2018, I’ve been working on converting my thoughts about Shrek into an academic essay. It’s not finished yet (and I haven’t made progress in quite some time), but I would like you to read a couple paragraphs of what I have so far. I have left my own annotations on the paragraphs to talk through my writing choices with you. This is a first draft!

Click here to view the PDF of my comments. Or here if you need a .docx file.

Then, please also read at least one of the following articles and skim the other two.

The first article is by a graduate student studying psychology, the second is by a graduate student studying anthropology, and the third is by an undergraduate student studying film and new media. Even though psychology and anthropology are considered social science instead of humanities, people from all majors can do humanities criticism!

1. “A Case Study of of Transgender Representation in Video Games: Mass Effect’s Hainly Abrams”
2. “Making Sense of Memes: Where They Come From and Why We Keep Clicking Them” (there are two pages, so when you reach the end of the first page make sure to click through)
3. “The Feminine Threat: Reconsidering the Damsel in Distress in Early Disney Films”

Another thing I want you to notice is how the titles of most academic essays are structured. They very often follow this pattern: “Short Fun Phrase: Longer More Descriptive Phrase”

What We’ll Do In Class

• Check in about last week’s project
• Discuss initial thoughts about the readings for today
• Identify some features of academic writing about the humanities
• Practice rhetorical outlining as a group
• Split into small groups to analyze other examples
• Talk about how the grading options are going and fill out this Google Form to indicate if you would like to change grading plans for Unit 2.

Due After Class (Structure & Accountability Option): Write a reflection of at least 1 page about the materials we looked at for today, class discussion, and anything it made you think about. Feel free to also discuss anything else about writing, genre, media, etc.

Things To Do on Async Thursday (2/25)

Readings:

Optional: Will provide other examples of academic writing in the humanities for you to look at

Assignments Due For Everyone:

Re-write your criticism from last week, but instead of writing it for social media, write it as if you were writing an academic essay.

I am NOT asking you to write a full essay (although you can if you want to).

Instead, I want you to write 3 or more paragraphs that adapt some aspects of your analysis from last week into academic writing, using the appropriate level of analysis and detail. Pretend that these paragraphs will belong to a much longer essay.

For example, in my Twitter thread, only one of my tweets was about the Robin Hood scene in Shrek, but that one tweet became nearly 2 pages of academic writing.

If you want to get some practice writing introductions and conclusions, one of your paragraphs can be an intro or a conclusion to your imagined full essay, but at least two of your paragraphs should be body paragraphs. (See below for how I will grade this)

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Preparing for Next Class (Tuesday 3/2):

Please fill out this Google Form to indicate if you would like to change grading plans for Unit 2.

Readings:

CCCCs Statement on Students’ Right to Their Own Language, pages 2-9, 22-23
Fish, “What Should Colleges Teach?”
Young, “Should Writers Use They Own English?”

Assignments Due For Everyone:

Unit 1 Reflection

Assignments Due for Structure and Accountability Folks (If You Chose This Option For Unit 2):

As you are doing the reading above, please read them in the order I’ve listed and complete “checkpoint reflections” after each one.

These reflections should address: 1) what you think the author’s main arguments are, 2) what you think about those arguments, 3) for the second two, how reading each one changed (or didn’t change) your opinion on the previous readings, and 4) anything else you want to add.

This week, we’ll be looking at humanities criticism in non-traditional genres. By this, I mean humanities writing that isn’t meant for publication in either academic journals or newspapers/magazines. Instead, we’ll look at Twitter, TikTok, and YouTube. Click here for an overview of the entire unit. 

Things We Did Last Week

• Made a list together of genre features of the genre of “resume” based on your research while creating your own imaginary resumes
• Learned about and practiced close reading and annotation of humanities texts (many people chose poems)
• Read some examples of reviews to get a sense for the genre
• Wrote your own reviews of a piece of media of your choice

Goals For This Week

Probably most of you have never written a formal review of something until last week, but you probably have talked about movies/music/TV shows/etc. with family, friends, or with people on the internet. Ever argued with someone about a piece of media in the comments on something? You’ve already done humanities criticism in a non-traditional genre!

• Study some of the ways people do humanities criticism in non-traditional genres.
• Think about the similarities and differences between “reviews” and “criticism” (I personally think it’s pretty hard to define the difference, but that doesn’t mean it’s not useful to consider!)
• Create your own humanities criticism in a non-traditional genre

Things Due Before Class on Tuesday (2/16):

Reading/Watching:

• Read Twitter threads on Shrek and Shrek 2
• Read this Twitter thread about classical art in Hercules
• Watch this TikTok about the symbolism of werewolves in Harry Potter
• Read this Twitter thread about The Grinch Who Stole Christmas
• Watch Willems, “How Greta Gerwig Revolutionized Little Women”

Assignments: None

The intros and outros of Willems’s videos are part of a long comedy storyline about him and his roommates that stretches across many videos, so if you find them confusing, don’t worry about it.

What We’ll Do In Class (2/16):

• Discuss anything that came up for you while writing your reviews
• Discuss your initial thoughts on the readings/videos for today
• Watch two more short examples of humanities criticism on YouTube
• Discuss the difference between “reviews” and “criticism” based on the things we’ve looked at so far this semester
• Optional: Reflect in small groups

Due After Class (Structure & Accountability Option): Write a reflection of at least 1 page about the materials we looked at for today, class discussion, and anything it made you think about. Feel free to also discuss anything else about writing, genre, media, etc.

Things To Do on Async Thursday (2/18)

Readings: I’ll find some more OPTIONAL examples for you to look at. And if you happen across any examples that you think are good/interesting while you’re scrolling through your feeds, please send them to me and I can add them!

Assignments Due (EVERYONE):

Create Your Own Humanities Criticism in a Non-Traditional Genre

1. For this assignment, you can write/create for any platform you want— Twitter, Instagram, YouTube, TikTok, or anything else. 100% your choice.
2. You can write about the same thing you wrote your review on, or you can choose a new thing.
3. Please use a platform that you are already comfortable with. The point isn’t to make you learn a new platform, it’s just to practice this kind of writing. If you choose a platform you’re already comfortable with, you likely already have a gut sense of the genre norms for writing/creating on this platform.  Your goal is to think about how to adapt the content of humanities criticism to what’s appropriate for the writing environment you’ve chosen.
   (For example, it would be weird if I tweeted about Shrek in the same style that I would use to write an academic essay. On Twitter, the goal is to say what you want to say in short, concise pieces. On Instagram, you already know that your audience will only see one square of content at a time, whether that’s on your story or in a post with multiple images.)
4. Think about what makes something “criticism” instead of “merely a review.” Remember to use specific evidence to support your interpretations.
5. In addition to your creation, please also write me a few sentences explaining how your creation matches the genre norms of your platform. This can be included in your creation or sent to me separately.

How to Submit:

You CAN post your creation on your real account and send me/us a link. But you DO NOT HAVE TO. 

Here are some other options:

• Last semester, some people wrote out a Facebook post, took a screenshot, and then deleted it without actually posting. Then they turned in the screenshot.
• You could also just write in a word doc or google doc, but pretend you’re writing on the platform of your choosing and use the same style you would there. For example, writing in tweet-length paragraphs, using hashtags/gifs/emojis/anything else you would normally use on Twitter.
• Sites like Canva offer you free templates for designing things like Instagram posts (this is useful for people who want to do more complex design work than Instagram’s built-in editor allows). You could design something there, download it, and then send it to me.

If you can think of another way that lets you complete this assignment while still maintaining your privacy comfort level, that’s totally fine too.

Grading

0 points– you did not turn anything in
2 points– your social media criticism only analyzes one piece of evidence, or makes general claims without referring to specific evidence from the piece you are analyzing
4 points– you analyze multiple pieces of evidence and present your analysis in a form appropriate for the platform you have chosen
5 points– you did everything for #4 and included a couple sentences explaining how your creation meets genre norms for the platform, and have no or very few typos or other small errors (spelling, etc.)

Preparing For Next Class (Tuesday 2/23)

Assignments Due: None

Readings: 

Since early 2018, I’ve been working on converting my thoughts about Shrek into an academic essay. It’s not finished yet (and I haven’t made progress in quite some time), but I would like you to read a couple paragraphs of what I have so far. I have left my own annotations on the paragraphs to talk through my writing choices with you. This is a first draft!

Click here to view the PDF of my comments. Or here if you need a .docx file.

Then, please read at least one of the following articles and skim the other two.

The first article is by a graduate student studying psychology, the second is by a graduate student studying anthropology, and the third is by an undergraduate student studying film and new media. Even though psychology and anthropology are considered social science instead of humanities, people from all majors can do humanities criticism!

1. “A Case Study of of Transgender Representation in Video Games: Mass Effect’s Hainly Abrams”
2. “Making Sense of Memes: Where They Come From and Why We Keep Clicking Them” (there are two pages, so when you reach the end of the first page make sure to click through)
3. “The Feminine Threat: Reconsidering the Damsel in Distress in Early Disney Films”

Another thing I want you to notice is how the titles of most academic essays are structured. They very often follow this pattern: “Short Fun Phrase: Longer More Descriptive Phrase”

Welcome to our second week of class, and our first week of our Humanities Criticism unit. Click here for an overview of the entire unit. 

Things We Did Last Week

• Got to know each other a little, got set up on the CUNY Commons, reviewed the plan and policies for the semester
• Learned a little bit of Genre Theory– what is genre? What are literary genres vs. “everyday genres”? What genres do we use in our daily lives?

Things Due Before Class on Tuesday (2/9)

Readings:

• Annotating Video 1
• Annotating Video 2
• Close Reading Video

And here’s a TikTok of an intentionally bad close reading just for fun.

Assignments for Everyone:

• Imaginary resume, posted to site or turned in on Blackboard

Assignments for Structure and Accountability Plan Folks:

• Have an example of humanities content (poem, song, section from a book, clip from a TV show, etc.) ready for us to practice close reading on in class

What We’ll Do in Class on Tuesday (2/9)

• Discuss what you learned from the genre readings
• Do one close reading together
• Breakout rooms to practice close reading in smaller groups using the examples you brought to class
• Annotation notes (due by end of day for Structure and Accountability Option folks)

Things to Do on Async Thursday (2/11)

Readings:

Zinsser, “Writing About the Arts: Critics and Columnists” (PDF)
Review of “Soul” (Movie)
Review of “The Grammarians” (Book)
Review of “Gentleman Jack” (TV Show)

Assignments Due for Everyone:

Review of a Piece of Media (1-2 pages)

Assignments For S/A Grading Plan Folks:

Notes/annotations on the 3 examples of reviews. What do you notice as essential features/norms of the genre of Reviews? If you had to teach someone else how to write a review, just based on these examples and your own prior knowledge, what would you tell them to do?

Preparing for Next Class (2/16)

• Read Twitter threads on Shrek and Shrek 2
• Read this Twitter thread about classical art in Hercules
• Watch this TikTok about the symbolism of werewolves in Harry Potter
• Read this Twitter thread about The Grinch Who Stole Christmas
• Watch Willems, “How Greta Gerwig Revolutionized Little Women”

Welcome to Unit 1: Humanities Criticism! We will spend three weeks on this unit, bringing us to the beginning of March.

What is/are “humanities”?

As a very general definition, the “humanities” are all of the academic disciplines that study things that humans create or ideas that humans think about, such as language, literature, religion, art, media, culture, philosophy, ethics, history, etc. In modern universities, this is set apart from the sciences (both natural science and social science) and “professional studies” (business, law, marketing, criminal justice, education, nursing, and anything else that is basically training for a specific kind of job).  But, the term comes from the Renaissance, when students at universities either studied “humanities” (human stuff) or “divinity” (training to be a priest) or medicine.

What is “humanities criticism”?

In academic situations, “criticism” doesn’t  have to mean complaining about or critiquing something, like the word “criticize” generally means. All it means is that we’re going to think deeply and analytically about humanities topics. Sometimes that will mean criticizing stuff. Sometimes it will mean analyzing both the good things and the bad things, or just trying to discover layers of meaning. It is extremely likely that you have all done humanities criticism before, such as if you’ve ever had to write an essay about a piece of literature in English class.

Essentially, “humanities criticism” is its own unit because most kinds of humanities writing require similar skills (such as close reading) compared to other areas of study. There are still differences in writing expectations for each area of the humanities (essays you write for philosophy class and essays you write for English class are going to have different expectations), and there are many different genres of humanities writing. In this unit, we’ll be studying reviews, criticism in a non-traditional genre, and academic criticism.

Writing For This Unit

There is no single “unit project” for this unit. Instead, you will be writing three different pieces of humanities criticism spread out across the unit.

These are:

1. A review of a piece of media of your choosing (book, movie, TV episode or TV show, album, or something else)
2. A critical analysis of a humanities artifact of your choosing (book, movie, song, video, etc.), written in a non-traditional genre (you can write it like a Twitter thread, a TikTok video, an Instagram story, a YouTube video, or as you would for another social media platform)
3. The same content as #2, but written as academic-style paragraphs.

Grading/Checklist for This Unit

The Humanities Criticism unit as a whole is worth 20% of your overall grade, regardless of which grading option you chose.

Maximum Flexibility Option Required Assignments/Grading:

1. Review of a Piece of Media (due 2/11) – 5pts, see rubric
2. Criticism in a non-traditional genre (due 2/18) – 5 pts, see rubric
3. Academic-style criticism (due 2/25)  5 pts, see rubric
4. Unit 1 Reflection (due 3/2) 5 pts, completion and thoroughness

Total: 20 pts. Each point is 1% of your final grade.

Structure and Accountability Option Required Assignments/Grading:

Here is a list of all graded activities for the unit and their point values:

1. Close Reading Practice (done in class 2/9) – 2 pts, completion
2. Annotations on Examples of Reviews (due 2/11)- 2 pts, completion
3. Review of a Piece of Media (due 2/11) — 5pts, see rubric
4. After-Class Reflection 1 (due 2/16) – 2pts, completion
5. Criticism in a non-traditional genre (due 2/18)- 5 pts, see rubric
6. After-Class Reflection 2 (due 2/23)- 2pts, completion
7. Academic-style criticism (due 2/25) – 5 pts, see rubric
8. Unit 1 Reflection (due 3/2)- 5 pts, completion and thoroughness

Total: 28 pts. Each point is .7% of your final grade.

**I will input all the math into Blackboard so you don’t have to worry about calculating what this means for you**