Digital Lecture: What is Ethnography?

Ethnography has two root words: ethno, and graph. Ethno means “race, culture, or people” — like in the sense of an ethnicity. Graph means “write” — telegraph, graphite, graphic, photography, phonograph, monograph, etc. So, ethnography literally means writing a culture.

Historically, ethnography is the primary genre used by anthropologists — scientists who study humanity as a whole. Biological anthropologists study human evolution and our physical bodies, cultural anthropologists study our cultures, linguistic anthropologists study our languages, and archaeologists study the belongings, buildings, and trash we leave behind.

“Ethnographic writing” refers to writing that may not be “an ethnography” but uses a similar approach. Ethnographic writing can appear in a variety of academic disciplines– education research, sociology, psychology, English, geography, history, and more.

Brief Anthropology History Lesson

The history of anthropology — like pretty much every area of study — is pretty interwoven with racism. Biological anthropologists (along with medical doctors) are responsible for some of the beliefs that people of different races are better or worse physically, or that their bodies make them better or worse mentally or emotionally. Anthropological research was used as a justification for a lot of horrible things.

Anthropology as its own discipline started in the 1800s, although people wrote “ethnographic” notes long before that. For example, Julius Caesar (Roman Emperor who lived in the B.C. era) wrote some ethnographic notes about the Gauls and other “barbarians” he met while conquering parts of Europe as a general.

So, cultural anthropology, the subfield that solidified what “ethnography” means in the modern sense, mostly took this form in the 1800s:

  1. An economically privileged white man (maybe not rich, but certainly with financial advantages in life), originally from Europe but later also from the U.S., would travel somewhere “exotic” to find some people who aren’t part of European/Western culture.
  2. He would live with them and talk to them and do stuff with them for a year or so, studying them and taking notes.
  3. Then he would go home and write a book describing their culture. They became “his” people, and other anthropologists would have to go find someone else to study.

You might already be able to think of some of the ethical problems with this. Anthropologists often did not ask permission to come study people, or give much back to the community they were staying with. Even though anthropologists try to understand other people’s way of life from their own perspective, they often failed, either by accident or because they were judgy and thought Western culture was superior. They often took things back with them, to sell or donate to museums. Sometimes they tried to impose their own ways of life upon the people they were studying.

So, a lot of it wasn’t good. At the same time, the discipline of anthropology has accumulated a lot of information about the very diverse cultures of humanity, which means there’s a lot of data on how what Western culture considers “just human nature” or “the normal way to do things” is not normal or human nature at all. For example, the first ethnography to go mainstream (as opposed to just being read by other anthropologists) was Coming of Age in Samoa by Margaret Mead (1928). People in the U.S. were really interested in this ethnography because Samoan teenagers didn’t exhibit many of the behaviors or moods associated with “just part of being a teenager.” They fought with their parents a lot less, for example, and seemed happy overall, as opposed to the stereotypical moodiness of American teenagers. Mead thought that this was because Samoan teenagers (at the time, at least) had a lot more freedom and trust than American teenagers, especially in the 1920s. It wasn’t controversial for them to have sex with each other. If they didn’t want to live with their parents, it wasn’t a big deal for them to go stay with a friend or another family member for awhile.

Modern Anthropology

While there are still plenty of ethical issues in the discipline of anthropology and in the genre of ethnography, anthropologists are by and large trying to recognize the racist and sexist histories of the discipline and reinvent their research practices.

Some key changes:

  1. Many more anthropologists study parts of their own cultures. There are now lots of ethnographies of different aspects of mainstream U.S. culture. Usually, ethnographies no longer try to describe all of an entire culture, but will instead focus on a key area (like a particular town) or group of people. For example, the punk scene.
  2. The discipline is more diverse — it’s not just white European and American men studying everyone else (although there is definitely a lot of improvement still to be made here).
  3. Many anthropologists practice applied anthropology— that is, using anthropological methods to try to figure out how to help a community. (An example might be an anthropologist going somewhere where the opioid epidemic is really bad to talk to people and figure out what aspects of their life situations lead them to getting addicted to opioids and what other factors are contributing to their struggles.) Applied anthropology is often used to craft public service announcements or promoting other public health initiatives. For example, how can you convince _____ group of people to use condoms, if they don’t want to use condoms?  I think a good use for an anthropologist right now could be, “For people who don’t want to take coronavirus precautions like masks and social-distancing, why not, and what would convince them to do it?”
  4. Many anthropologists work or volunteer at the place/with the people they are studying, as a way of being helpful and giving back to the community instead of just taking up time and knowledge and resources. For example, when David Valentine was researching the lives of trans people in downtown Manhattan in the 1990s, he was also working at the LGBT Center to help provide people with medical resources. Working at the LGBT Center gave him additional opportunities to meet and talk to people, but he was also making a positive impact.
  5. Many anthropologists do collaborative research, where instead of just showing up and doing a study, they work together with members of the community. The anthropologist might ask, “What kind of research would you like to do?” or “What information would you find it useful to have?” Sometimes this takes the form of oral history collections to preserve a community’s stories and lives, or language preservation, in cases when only a few people in a community still speak an ancestral language, so the language is at risk of dying out.

Back to Ethnography

So, just as the discipline of anthropology has a gross history but is evolving, so does the genre of ethnography. One issue with ethnography is that it is originally a scientific genre, with all the claims to “objective truth” that come with it. Another issue is that word choice and the author’s perspective can embed a lot of bias (usually negative) into the writing. The anthropologist may not even realize they’re doing it.

One important change in ethnography is that now it’s much more common for anthropologists to talk about themselves, and explain their relationship to the people they’re writing about and their own position in society, and to reflect on how that might affect their perspective. Whereas an anthropologist back in the day might try to “fade into the background” of his ethnography and pretend he was just an invisible camera watching the people, a modern anthropologist might talk about who she is, her own emotional reactions to her experiences and what she thought about it. You can never fully escape your own bias, but by trying to be as honest and transparent about it as you can, you can help the reader to put the information in context.

Many college classes have “mini-ethnography” assignments. When I was in college, we all had to go to a restaurant near campus and conduct a mini-ethnography of the restaurant. We had to sit there for about an hour, eat some food, and observe everything that happened around us. What kinds of people came in? What kinds of things did they order? How did they interact with the employees? What was the vibe? Then, we went home and wrote about it.

So, the general process for an ethnography is:

  1. Go to your “place” (place is in quotation marks because you could also do an ethnography of an internet community) and spend some time there. Observe how people act and interact, and what kinds of people are there. This is called your fieldwork.
  2. Take notes on your observations, but don’t be weird about it
  3. As soon as possible after your fieldwork, write down everything you remember noticing in as much detail as you can. These are your fieldnotes.
  4. Write an article describing your findings.

An ethnography will often follow the same general form as a scientific article, but it’s less strict. You can say “I” and talk about yourself. You should still talk about your research methods, your results, and do a discussion of your results, but these sections can be mixed together more if you want. You should still try to be thorough, as objective as possible, and always back up your ideas with evidence. You should definitely write about any expectations you had that were wrong, or times when you had to revise your interpretation or opinion.  More on this in the assignment instructions!

Weeks 8 & 9 (3/23, 3/25, and Spring Break): Natural Science Writing Cont.

Welcome to the last stretch of Unit 2. We’re officially halfway through the semester! Click here for a full unit overview. This week, we’ll be revising our drafts based on peer feedback.

No Zoom Class on Tuesday, 3/23. 

What To Do for Async Tuesday, 3/23

  • If you have signed up for peer review, please give feedback to your partner by the end of the day, and also turn in the feedback to me (either via Blackboard or via email) so that I can give you credit for it.
  • If you are not participating in peer review, just keep working on your paper!
  • For everyone: LMK if you want to schedule a time to meet and talk about your writing.
  • The link and password to the Zoom recording of the APA lesson is in your email. I don’t want to post the password here since the site is open to the public– email me if you have trouble finding it.

Optional: Read excerpts from “Genre and the Experimental Article” — it’s an analysis of the kind of writing we’re doing!  Click here to view the PDF.

What To Do for Async Thursday, 3/25

Assignments Due (Everyone):

Unit 2/Midterm Reflection! Instructions here. 

Ongoing Work (Everyone):

Continue working on/revising your Unit 2 projects. LMK if you want to schedule a time to meet and talk about your writing.

Suggested (But Optional) Revision Exercises:

As you’re revising, you might know you want to change some more things but not know where to begin. I strongly recommend grading yourself using the real rubric to help you identify what areas you want to work on.

You can also compare your paper to some of the examples we’ve looked at.

If you want to, you and your peer review partner could decide to give each other a second round of comments. 

Or, you could schedule a digital appointment at the writing center.

Spring Break (3/24-4/4)

The final draft of your Unit 2 project is due on Tuesday, 4/6, our first day back after spring break. However, if I were you, I would try to turn it in before spring break so that you can, you know, actually take a break and not worry about it.

There are two readings due before class on 4/6 as well, but it’s no more than a normal class day’s worth of work, and is designed for you to do Monday night, rather than over your break. That stuff will be the start of Unit 3, so I’ll write about it in a separate post.

 

Unit 2 Reflection Instructions

The Unit 2/Midterm Reflection is due for everyone on Thursday, 3/25.

You can answer these questions 1 by 1 like a worksheet, or write out your reflection in paragraph form.

  1. What do you feel like you learned this unit that you didn’t know before?
  2. What did you already know , but now understand better or learned more about?
  3. What (if anything) do you feel like I wanted you to learn, but you still aren’t sure about?
  4. What are the strengths of your final project article? What are you most proud of?
  5. If you were to revise your final project article, what would you want to do differently?
  6. How would you describe or rate your participation/engagement in this unit?
  7. What did you do this unit that helped make you successful?
  8. What (if anything) do you want to do differently in the next unit?
  9. Please complete the sentence: “This class would be better if……”
  10. For you, how did this unit compare to the Humanities Unit? Do you have any suggestions for when I revise for future semesters?
  11. Now that we have 2 units completed (or almost completed), what do you think about the system of different grading plans? Should I continue this system in future semesters? Why or why not?

The unit reflection will be graded out of 5 points.

0 points: You didn’t turn in a reflection.
1 point: 
You turn in something that does reflect on the unit at least a little
2 points: 
You address at least half of the questions in your reflection
3 points: You address most of the questions in your reflection
4 points: You answer all of the questions in your reflection
5 points: You answer all of the questions using specific examples

Week 7 (3/16 and 3/18): Natural Science Writing

This week, we will continue talking about the genre norms and expectations for writing in the natural sciences and practice giving constructive feedback to one another. Click here for an overview of Unit 2.

3 Quick Things First:

  1. If you want to receive notifications of announcements and reminders not via email, click here to sign up for the class Remind group.This is fully optional.
  2. If you haven’t done so already, please fill out this Google Form to choose a grading option for Unit 2. As of when I’m writing this, 23/27 of you have already filled it out.
  3. This Tuesday (3/16), another English professor will be joining us in Zoom class to do my teaching observation. Please don’t be nervous– he’s there to evaluate me, not you– but also please make an extra effort to be prepared and participate. 🙂

Preparing for Tuesday (3/16)

Readings Due:

“Shitty First Drafts” by Anne Lammot

Assignments Due (Required for Structure & Accountability Folks, Recommended for Everyone):

  1. Write a first draft of your imaginary article! Have your draft ready by class time so we can discuss them together. Instructions & Rubric Here
  2. Fill out the Unit 2 Peer Review Survey

Even if you don’t have a draft ready by Tuesday morning, I encourage you to come to class anyway! It’ll still be beneficial to participate in discussion, and you can look at some classmates’ papers for inspiration for your own.

What We’ll Do In Class Tuesday

  • Discuss your observations/annotations about the genre features of academic natural science writing
  • Talk about your writing processes (and take a DEEP BREATH)
  • Discuss questions and sticky places that you encountered while writing
  • Go over the plan for the coming weeks
  • If we have time, go into breakout rooms to write and/or give feedback

Things To Do On Async Thursday (3/18)

“Readings”:

***These videos are from last semester, so some things I say might be outdated/related only to last semester.***

 

Assignments/Activities:

Optional: Read More Examples of Imaginary Science Articles

Preparing for Tuesday (3/23)

Next Tuesday, 3/23, we will NOT have synchronous Zoom class. Please just keep working on your papers! If you would like to talk about your paper, please email me so we can set up a time to meet! I’m more than happy to do individual conferences with you.

Unit 2 Peer Review Instructions

**I will email you with peer review partner assignments once more people have filled out the peer review form.**

Peer Review Comments Are Due Tuesday, 3/23

Please share your paper with your partner according to the peer review method chosen, then give comments/feedback in a form appropriate for your peer review method. (For example, if you’re using Google Docs, use the Commenting feature. If you’re using email, you could write comments using MS Word comments or another program and email, or just write an email with feedback in paragraph or bullet point form.)

You should also share your draft with me, whether you use email, upload it to the course site, or upload it to Blackboard.

In addition to general feedback/comments, please also fill out a peer review report for your peer and share it with both me and them.

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Week 6 (3/9 and 3/11): Beginning Unit 2

This week, we will begin talking about some of the genre norms and expectations for writing in the natural sciences. Click here for an overview of Unit 2.

3 Quick Things First:

  1. If you want to receive notifications of announcements and reminders not via email, click here to sign up for the class Remind group.This is fully optional.
  2. If you haven’t done so already, please fill out this Google Form to choose a grading option for Unit 2. As of when I’m writing this, 23/27 of you have already filled it out.
  3. Not this Tuesday, but the following Tuesday (3/16), another English professor will be joining us in Zoom class to do my teaching observation. Please don’t be nervous– he’s there to evaluate me, not you– but also please make an extra effort to be prepared and participate. 🙂

Preparing for Tuesday (3/9)

Readings Due:

  1. Read Unit 2 Overview
  2. Listen to Podcast: “Sawbones: COVID Lies, Darned Lies, and Statistics”
  3. Read Phony Study on Coronavirus from April 2020  (This study is FALSE/deeply misleading, and we’ll talk about why during class)

Assignments Due: None!

What We’ll Do In Class Tuesday

  • Discuss the use of statistics and data in scientific communication
  • Discuss how the phony study uses the genre of science articles to mislead people
  • Go over the instructions/rubric for the Unit 2 Project

Things To Do on Async Thursday (3/11)

On Thursday, I’m asking you to start looking at some examples of academic articles in the sciences. One of these is imaginary (pretending they did a study within the world of Harry Potter). The rest are real, mostly from the last month or two.

While reading for the content is interesting, please primarily focus on noticing aspects of the genre. How do scientific articles differ in structure and style from the kinds of writing we’ve looked at in previous weeks?

Readings:

Come back to these later on in the unit to skim as additional examples of scientific writing!

Assignments Due (Required for Structure & Accountability Plan folks only–but everyone is welcome/encouraged to do them!):

  1. Observations/Annotations

    As you read, make a list of things you observe about the genre of scientific articles. Similar to what we did for humanities reviews! How are the articles structured? What kinds of information do they include? How does the sentence-level writing style differ from other kinds of writing?

  2. Brainstorming for Your Own Article

    Take some time to brainstorm ideas for your own article. What imaginary worlds might you be interested in writing about? If you were a scientist in one of these worlds, what things might you be interested in studying? Based on your knowledge of scientific methods (which is probably limited, and that’s okay!), how would you go about conducting these studies?
    Try to come up with 3 different options for your project, then write me a note about which one you’re leaning toward and why.

  3. Fill out the Peer Review Survey

Preparing for Next Week (Tuesday 3/16)

Readings Due:

“Shitty First Drafts” by Anne Lammot

Assignments Due:

  1. Write a first draft of your imaginary article! Have your draft ready by class time so we can discuss them together.
  2. Fill out the Unit 2 Peer Review Survey

Unit 2 Project Instructions and Rubric

Unit 2 Project: Imaginary Scientific Article

The purpose of this project is to practice writing in the genre of academic science articles.

Due Dates

Brainstorming Assignment: End of Thursday, 3/11
First draft: Before Class on Tuesday, 3/16
Peer Review Comments: End of Tuesday, 3/23
Revised draft: End of Tuesday, 4/6

To begin:

  1. Choose an imaginary world. It can be a fantasy world (like Harry Potter or the MCU), or a fictional version of our own world (like Riverdale).
  2. Imagine a science experiment or study that could take place in that world.
  3. Imagine how the researchers would design their experiment, what they would do, and what kinds of data they would collect.
  4. Decide what you want the results of the experiment/study to be (this is NOT part of the scientific process. We are ONLY doing this because it is imaginary, so we have no real data).
  5. Make up some data that supports those results.
  6. If you were a scientist in your imaginary situation, doing your imaginary research, what pre-existing articles might exist that you would want to refer to? For example, if you’re making up an experiment conducted in Stranger Things 2, maybe you refer to an imaginary previous paper based on the events of Season 1. For starters, come up with a title and author name for each imaginary source.

Once you have completed the imagination work, now it’s time to write!

Your article should:

  1. Use APA formatting (have an APA-style title page, have a running head, have an abstract and key words, use APA subheading styles)
  2. Include all of the major sections of a scientific article (Introduction, Methods, Results, Analysis/Discussion, Conclusion)
  3. In each paragraph, follow conventions for academic writing (topic sentence, information, explanation/analysis of information, conclusion/transition sentence)
  4. Include an imaginary works cited page (also in APA style—3 imaginary sources)
  5. Use a sentence-level conventions appropriate for scientific writing (third person, passive voice, objective tone, etc.)

Rubric (graded out of 15 points)

APA Formatting (0.3 points each for a total of 3 points)

  • Title page ___
  • Title ____
  • Name ___
  • University ____
  • Correct Running Head First Page ____
  • Correct Running Head Subsequent Pages ____
  • Page Numbers ____
  • Abstract ___
  • Keywords ___
  • Beginning of works cited page is titled “References” ___

Structural Genre Norms (2 points each for a total of 6 points)

  • Article is divided according to the major sections of a scientific paper and includes all of these sections. These sections are labeled with APA-style subheadings ___
  • Each paragraph is focused around one subtopic or piece of information ____
  • Each paragraph includes a topic sentence, analysis or interpretation of the information, and a conclusion or transition sentence ___

Stylistic Genre Norms (1 point each for a total of 4 points)

Article consistently exhibits:

  • Use of the third person ___
  • Passive voice when appropriate ___
  • Formal tone/word choice ___
  • High level of specificity, context, and detail ____

Works Cited/References (1 point each for 2 points total)

  • Article includes 3 imaginary sources that are referenced in the body of the article and documented in APA style in a references section ___
  • The imaginary sources make sense within the context of the chosen imaginary world and make sense as sources that would be referenced within a scientific paper ___

 

Week 5 (3/2 and 3/4): Mini-Unit on Academic Writing and Grammar

Congratulations!! We’ve finished Unit 1!! Before we get started on our second major unit (Natural Science Writing), I wanted to take a week to talk about “academic writing” and grammar more specifically. “Good Grammar” or writing in “Standard American Academic English” is something a lot of students have anxiety about, and a lot of teachers get upset about. So, I think it’s important to both talk about some of the history and social issues involved in grammar instruction, and then also do a little bit of learning and practice with some common rules you’ll want to know for writing for school.

Review of Last Week

  • Read some examples of academic writing in the humanities
  • Compared academic-style criticism to traditional media and new/digital media criticism
  • Practiced rhetorical/descriptive outlining, where we focused on identifying the purpose behind the author’s inclusion of each sentence in an essay.
  • Practiced writing academic-style criticism yourself

Preparing for Tuesday (3/2)

Readings Due:

CCCCs Statement on Students’ Right to Their Own Language, pages 2-9, 22-23
Fish, “What Should Colleges Teach?”
Young, “Should Writers Use They Own English?”

The assigned reading for this week is a bit longer than in past weeks– make sure to give yourself plenty of time! Please also read them in the order I’ve listed, since each subsequent article refers to the previous ones.

Assignments Due For Everyone:

Unit 1 Reflections (Instructions here)
Fill out this Google Form to choose your grading plan for the next unit

Assignments Due for Structure & Accountability Plan Folks (if you choose this plan for the NEW unit on the Google Form above)

As you are doing the reading listed above, please read the articles in the order I’ve listed and complete “checkpoint reflections” after each one.

These reflections should address: 1) what you think the author’s main arguments are, 2) what you think about those arguments, 3) for the second two, how reading each one changed (or didn’t change) your opinion on the previous readings, and 4) anything else you want to add.

What We’ll Do In Class Tuesday

  • Discuss! There’s a lot of material here in these readings, and it’s important!

Due After Class (S&A Plan):
I’ll post a discussion prompt on the class site. Please respond by the end of the day.

Things To Do on Async Thursday (3/4)

  1. Read “Grammar, Grammars, and the Teaching of Grammar”
  2. Read My Digital Lecture 
  3. Structure & Accountability folks: Complete a syntax and word choice activity (syntax is the linguistics term for “how words are arranged”)

Preparing for Next Class (3/9)

  1. Read Unit 2 Overview
  2. Listen to Podcast: “Sawbones: COVID Lies, Darned Lies, and Statistics”
  3. Read Phony Study on Coronavirus from April 2020  (This study is FALSE/deeply misleading, and we’ll talk about why during class)

3/4 Assignment: Syntax and Word Choice Activity

For today, we’re going to be doing a very old activity. This activity was invented by a guy named Erasmus in the 16th century, as a writing exercise for his students. 

Think back to the digital lecture on grammar and our discussion of many different ways to construct a sentence. I re-wrote the same ideas (about drinking my coffee and washing my mug) several different ways. You don’t need to remember all of the different linguistics terms for types of clauses and types of sentences. But think about how different words can be arranged into phrases that can be swapped around and changed.

Now also think about how any given word can be rephrased. Instead of “coffee,” I could have said “my caffeinated beverage” or “my warm brewed liquid made from beans that I drink in the morning” or any number of other things. I could also be more specific– let’s pretend I had a specific kind of coffee, like a latte or cappuccino.  “Coffee” is certainly the most common and simple way to express what I did, but a very similar thing could be expressed in other ways.

I could also change other words in the sentence: maybe I sipped it, or gulped it, or nursed it, or tasted it. Or I could add details: “I drank my coffee, with a dash of creamer and no sugar.” Maybe I describe the shade of brown it was, or describe the mug I used.

Point is, there’s lots of different ways I could express the same idea– that I drank my coffee.

Your Task

  1. You’re going to rewrite a sentence in as MANY different ways as you possibly can.
  2. Give yourself a time limit that you think will be HARD to achieve– for example, decide that you will write variations on the sentence for 10 minutes straight.
  3. When you think you can’t possibly think of any more ways to rewrite the sentence, push yourself to keep going for at least 3 more variations.
  4. See how many you can do!
  5. After you’re done, write down a guess for how many variations Erasmus came up with himself. I’ll tell you the answer in class next week.

I won’t grade you on how many you come up with– just that you completed the activity. However, please do note down the time limit you chose.

Here is the sentence:

“Your letter pleased me greatly.”

GO!

Digital Lecture: Grammar, Punctuation, and Syntax

This is the digital lecture for you to read on 3/4. I’m just posting it early! 

By the time you read this, hopefully you have already read “Grammar, Grammars, and the Teaching of Grammar” and learned that the value of grammar instruction is suspect at best. Just as with any form of language learning, the best way to improve and diversify your sentence structure and “accuracy” is through exposure and practice. This is one value in reading academic writing that is “hard”: by pushing through it, you’ll have more practice with complex sentence structures.

However, I also believe it can be useful to have some examples of grammatical concepts and language to attach to concepts you’re already familiar with on a subconscious level. Often, people say that learning a new language is one of the best ways to understand the grammar of your first language. Many of you already speak multiple languages, so even if you don’t know the linguistics terms, you’ll already have some awareness of the differences in how each language does things differently.

In this digital lecture, I want to focus on a couple of things that come up often in my classes, either in “errors” I notice or in what students say they would like to improve on: punctuation, types of clauses, and types of sentence structure. The last two are related to what people mean when they say, “I want to make my writing more sophisticated” or “I want to make my writing sound less simplistic”  or “I want to make my writing flow better.”

You do not need to memorize the vocabulary here. I’m providing it in case you find it helpful for thinking about the concepts. The concepts are more important than the words.

Types of Clauses and Sentence Structures

Just like our bodies have different levels of organization (atoms –> molecules –> organelles –> cells –> tissues –> organs –> bodily systems –> a full body), so do sentences, although we normally think of them as just having 2: sentences, and words.

“Clauses” are sub-units of a sentence, made up of phrases, made up of words. A sentence could only have one clause, or it could have many clauses. Every clause has a subject and a verb (and any other words the verb requires in order to make sense).

simple sentence is a sentence that is only one clause. Example: I drank some coffee.

There are two main kinds of clauses: independent and dependent (dependent clauses are also known as “subordinate” clauses).  An independent clause is any clause that could be a sentence all on its own, even if it happens to be connected to other clauses. (“I drank some coffee” is an independent clause.)

I drank some coffee, and then I refilled my cup.
This sentence has two independent clauses. We know because we could rewrite it as two separate sentences: I drank some coffee. Then, I refilled my cup. So, this is one way you can introduce variety into your sentences! Which way do you prefer? Either one is correct.

compound sentence is a sentence that has two (or more) independent clauses. “I drank my coffee, and then I refilled my cup” is a compound sentence. Compound sentences can use lots of different connecting words between the two clauses: “and,” “but,” and “so” are probably the most common.

More Examples of Compound Sentences, Re-written as Two Separate Sentences

  1. I drank my coffee, but it was already cold.//// I drank my coffee. However, it was already cold.
  2. Then my mug was dirty, so I put it in the dishwasher. //// My mug was dirty. I put it in the dishwasher.

What’s a dependent clause?

A dependent clause has a subject and a verb, but it can’t be a sentence on its own, or else it doesn’t make sense. Example: After I drank my coffee. This clause, when it’s by itself, makes you think, “After you drank your coffee, what?”

Dependent clauses need a friend. The friend has to be an independent clause. Example: After I drank my coffee, I put my mug in the dishwasher.  “I put my mug in the dishwasher” could be a sentence by itself, but “After I drank my coffee” could not be.

When you have an independent clause and a dependent clause in the same sentence, that’s called a complex sentence.

You can also add multiple dependent clauses to the same sentence: “Before I drank my coffee, I had to wash a mug, because all of my mugs were dirty.” 

“Before I drank my coffee” and “Because all of my mugs were dirty” are both dependent clauses, but if we take them away, “I had to wash a mug” still works as a sentence by itself.

One more sentence type: the compound-complex sentence. This is when you combine at least two independent clauses and at least one dependent clause. Example: After I started drinking my coffee, I realized it was already cold, so I put it in the microwave to reheat it. (Dependent clause, independent, independent)

To make sentences even more complex, you can add even more clauses. Here are some very long/complicated sentences that are still grammatically correct. (Scroll all the way down to the bottom– they get REALLY long!)

And just for fun, here’s some sentences that don’t sound correct, but they are!

What’s the Point of Sentence Variety and Having Complicated Sentences?

  1. Sometimes, dependent clauses can show the relationships between ideas or actions: “after,” “before,” “because” and “since” all add meaning to the sentence.
  2. Changing up the structure of your sentences helps you create rhythm in your writing. Look at the following example:

Punctuation

Notice how in all of the examples above, commas are used to separate the clauses. However, that’s not the only time we use commas. There’s too many punctuation rules to talk about all of them here, but I’ll address a few.

Commas

Most people just kind of guess where they think a comma should go, or put commas based on where they would naturally pause when speaking. While neither method will be 100% “accurate” based on the rules of academic American English, both will get you pretty close, and will typically result in writing the reader can understand.

When Do You Use a Comma With “And”?

  1. When you’re listing nouns/objects/concepts, DON’T use a comma if there are only two things (apples and oranges), but DO use commas when there are three or more things (apples, oranges, and bananas). Sometimes you’ll see it as “apples, oranges and bananas.” This is not technically wrong, but grammar nerds have strong opinions about it and mostly prefer it with two commas.
  2. When you’re listing verbs/actions, it depends on whether you have two clauses or not!

Remember: a clause must have a subject and a verb. So, let’s look at these examples, which I will first write without any commas:

  1. Today I had office hours and then wrote this grammar lecture.
  2. Yesterday I had therapy and then I went to the store to buy snacks

Where should the commas be (or not be)?  Sentence two should have a comma before “and” because the second part of the sentence is an independent clause. I could rewrite it as “Yesterday, I had therapy. Then I went to the store to buy snacks.” I can’t rewrite Sentence 1 in the same way, because the second sentence would be “Then wrote this grammar lecture.” Who wrote it? The sentence doesn’t say.

So:

  1. Today I had office hours and then wrote this grammar lecture.
  2. Yesterday I had therapy, and then I went to the store to buy snacks.

Punctuating Quotations and Citations

This is the other big area of confusion for punctuation that you’ll come across a lot in academic writing. Let’s look at this sentence from the “Memes” article we read last week:

In Douglas’ words (1995), “Each of these programs in one way or another unlocks for the individual user a pluralist world of visual imagery, transmitted on demand and by personal choice” (p.382). 

The Beginning of the Quote

In APA format, you put the year in parentheses after the author’s name. Whether you need a comma before the quote depends on the formulation of the sentence. For example if the sentence was “Douglas (1995) says that….” then I wouldn’t need a comma. One way to think about it is, if this WASN’T a quote, and was just my own writing, would I need a comma there? If this sentence started with “In other words” and was not a quote, we would still need a comma. So a comma goes after the parentheses.

The End of the Quote

If the part you’re quoting ends with a comma, a period, or no punctuation at all, then you don’t need any punctuation before your second pair of quotation marks. Instead, as you see in the quote above, you end the quote, then go directly into your parenthetical citation. Only after that do you include the end punctuation (in this case a period, but it could also be a comma if you’re going to continue on with another thought in the same sentence).

If the part you’re quoting ends with a ? or !, then you DO put that before the quotation marks. So, “Get off my lawn!” the grumpy man said (p.32).  Or: In the play Hamlet, Hamlet asks, “To be, or not to be?” (p.40). 


This has gotten pretty long, so I’m going to stop here. My biggest tip is this: if you’re not sure how to punctuate something, look around online or in past readings you’ve done for your classes to find examples of where the author does the same thing you’re doing. Then punctuate the same way they did. For example, you can always come back to this post to copy the punctuation from these quotes!

The assignment for 3/4 (the day you’re assigned to be reading this digital lecture) will be about sentence structure and variety, not punctuation. Will post that in a separate place for easy access!